"Nau Mai haere mai -I am in a Year 5 and 6 class called Kotuku at Mangonui School and my teacher is Miss van der Voort.
Welcome to my reflective blog. Please remember I am learning to write my ideas clearly for an audience.
There may be mistakes but I look forward to your helpful, thoughtful and kind comments."
Kia ora Te Ahere! I love your introduction! It has lots of detail and descriptive words. Perhaps you could re read your work and make sure all the small words you need are there. Ka pai to mahi - look forward to seeing more of your work over lockdown.
Kia Ora. Thank you for visiting my blog, I would love a thoughtful, helpful and kind comment. All comments are moderated by my teacher so there may be a delay before they appear.
Kia ora Te Ahere! I love your introduction! It has lots of detail and descriptive words. Perhaps you could re read your work and make sure all the small words you need are there. Ka pai to mahi - look forward to seeing more of your work over lockdown.
ReplyDeleteYou and Mile did an awesome job of your narrative must be good to work together on tasks.
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